Thursday, May 3, 2007

Marcia Talley: “Write what you’re passionate about.”

Marcia Talley is the Agatha and Anthony award-winning author of Sing It To Her Bones, Unbreathed Memories, Occasion of Revenge, In Death’s Shadow and This Enemy Town. The sixth book in the Hannah Ives mystery series, Through the Darkness, was released in September 2006. She is the editor/author of Naked Came the Phoenix and I’d Kill for That, star-studded, tongue-in-cheek collaborative serial novels set in a fashionable health spa and upscale gated community. Marcia’s short stories appear in more than a dozen collections, including the multi-award winning stories “Too Many Cooks” and “Driven to Distraction.”

Marcia lives in Annapolis, Maryland with her husband, Barry, a professor at the U.S. Naval Academy. The Writerly Pause spoke to her on a recent Sunday afternoon.


The Writerly Pause: You’re one of the many writers who came to writing later in life. What inspired you to act on the impulse to write?

Marcia: I’ve always been interested in writing, and have kept a journal for many years—something I think is imperative for any writer. I’m a breast cancer survivor, and knew that I had to make a change if I wanted to write. Time was moving. I had been commuting an hour each way from Annapolis to Washington for my job (as a librarian), and was afraid it would kill me. The final decision to stop came when I was stranded in a snowstorm on the way.

TWP: Did you take courses, sign up for a writing program?

M: No, I joined a writer’s group. I found them at a bookstore—they wanted people to read in the mystery genre. We’ve been together for ten years now, though we did have to expel a couple of members during that time.

TWP: How does the group work.

M: We meet once a month. We e-mail each other ten to thirty pages, but don’t discuss more than three submissions at a time. Working with the group gives us a deadline. We discuss POV and plot, and big overarching issues. We help with query letters.

TWP: Are there any men in your group?

M: (Laughs) One or two. We want the diversity.

TWP: How did you find your first agent, get published the first time.

M: I was accepted into the Sewanee Writers’ Conference in Tennessee, and worked with John Casey. After he critiqued my manuscript, I threw away everything but the first chapter, and that became the first chapter of Sing It To Her Bones.

I later submitted the novel for the Malice Domestic Grant Award, and won. That got me my first agent and publisher.

TWP: What is your impression of publishing today?

M: It’s a very tight market, with only five major publishers. It’s harder for an agent to pitch a book with so few opportunities. And it’s strictly a business. If an author’s subsequent novels don’t show a modest increase in sales, she’s dropped.

New York City doesn’t know the next trend until it falls on them, but there are good, small quality presses.

TWP: Annapolis is the setting for your books. Is there any other place that you’ve traveled to that you would consider as a setting for Hannah Ives?

M: I’m working on a proposal where Hannah would go to England, but I would love to send her to the Bahamas.

I consider myself the Queen of Proposals, but in the past I tried to tell too much. Now I set the scene, talk about the character and get them in trouble. I don’t give away the ending.

TWP: Any advice about submitting manuscripts.

M: The query letter should be one page, about four paragraphs. Usually a synopsis of two to three pages is sent, and the first three chapters. The first sentence is very important.

TWP: How do you work?

M: I write after dinner. One of my rules is don’t fall in love with your prose, and that means cut. I read my stuff aloud. If it sounds wrong I cut it out. Everything has to move the plot forward, and I try to put in just enough detail. Writing short stories is a good exercise.

TWP: What did you read as a child?

M: Nancy Drew. So wonderful: an independent girl who solves crimes and drives a cool car. And Agatha Christie. She was my mother’s favorite. Agatha Christie is a textbook for writing the traditional mystery. I still re-read her for inspiration.

TWP: Who are your reading now:

M: P.D. James, Andrew Taylor, Phil Rickman, Cornelia Read. I especially recommend A Pale Blue Eye, by Louis Bayard. I also read historical fiction.

TWP: Has your style changed over time?

M: I’m not as afraid of putting my thoughts down on paper.

TWP: Any last advice?

M: Write what you’re passionate about, and don’t give up too early. One of my friends had 140 rejections before being published.

Marcia’s website is: www.marciatalley.com


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Also published on thewriterlypause.blogspot.com

1 comment:

Kanani said...

Go go go!

Nice, John. Nice choice of handle!